Welcome to weekend writing warriors. Many fine authors, and me, contribute short snippets for your delectation. This is the start of a new work, Illegal Aliens. It is something of a cross between a horror story, a science fiction tale, and a romance.
Roland, an archaeology instructor at Reading University (academic ranks in the UK are different than in the US, he’d be an assistant professor in the land of the free), is on his way to London. He’s on call when something unusual turns up in the works on the new underground. After an interesting conversation on the train, he arrives to find the odd item – a block of Roman Concrete which is covered in inscriptions.
This blurb starts after he’s caught a cab back home, or close enough (his local).
A few minutes and twenty pounds later, Roland stood in front of the Roebuck; he paused before entering the old pub; through the door in the brick face below the timber and stucco; it had been his local when he had started as a junior faculty member at the university. It was still his local, after … after his wife and son had disappeared; they’d planned to move, even looked at houses that were much nicer than the terrace they lived in, but events had intervened.
He pushed the door open, relaxed in the comforting familiar buzz of voices, and walked up to the bar.
“The usual?”
“Nah, maybe curry for a change, and a pint.”
“Courage?”
Roland laughed, the local brewery’s name seemed oddly appropriate, “Directors’ ale if you have it.”
The barkeep drew him a pint, placed it on the bar, and went to place his order in the kitchen.
Roland found a table, off in a corner by himself where he could watch the television; it was playing reruns of some murder mystery or another; a show that wasn’t entrancing enough to distract him from his thoughts; he took out his camera and studied the pictures.
“Odd all those religious symbols … it will make a good paper,” He started transcribing what he could make out of the inscription onto a sheet of paper; fragments of Latin eroded by time and bomb damage; there were hints of Greek, and a run of Occam’s runes.
My sincere apologies for abusing semi-colons.
Using Courage here is a bit of an anachronism. Founded in 1787, they finally closed in 2010, but until then were based in Reading. You could see the brewery from the M4. It’s still brewed by Charles Wells, but it isn’t quite the same.
Interesting, it sounds like a really promising new piece you’ve got there. And I liked the little history lesson on Courage!
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I like the ‘voice’ in the snippet, very smooth, and of course the hints of a tragic backstory are intriguing. I have to confess the whole “courage” thing went right over my head! I thought the person had misheard the word curry 🙂
Sorry for being so late to reply. English pubs that are associated with a brewery have a plaque over the door. You’d see “courage” as you enter.
You’re getting deep into local color here. Are there clues elsewhere that Courage is a drink? If not, I wonder how many readers will understand.
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Scene moves very comfortably and pulls you right in visually. Well done, Amelia.
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He really has found something interesting. About Courage: I thought the same as Veronica, that it was a misunderstanding of curry. Oh, well… Nice snippet.
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I like the glace at a sad backstory.
The “curry” went right over my head too. After reading your bit about the brewery, I think it’s a neat addition, but I hope it’s mentioned in more depth. It’d be a shame to have it go over most readers’ heads. 🙂
Good snippet. 🙂
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